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Call For Freedom Denied by ~ripjaws-girl21:iconripjaws-girl21:



Staring out its cage, the little bird sees
Its kin flying wild and free
He wonders to himself, "Why?
Why do they spread their wings and fly?"
The little bird looks out the bars
Wondering if things really are
Why is he stuck in a prison, shut in?
When he should be with his kin
His wings are cut, feathers maimed
And he is barely able to stay sane
Each day he sings out his heart
Trying to call to freedom, but they're far apart
He sings to the sun, moon, and stars
Asking them, "Why are
Things this way?
Can I not go out and play?
Flying and singing in the sun,
Looks like so much fun."
Sleeping under the stars, not in a cage
This prison where the bird is hardly sane
Iron bars, maimed wings, unable to leave
Not even a moment's reprieve
In the outside air
All the little bird can do is stare,
Being taunted by the earth and sky,
Watching as the world passes him on by
:iconripjaws-girl21:

Author's Comments

A poem I worte in study hall the other day while I was bored. I think it was inspired by an episode of Wife Swap or something like that were the girl of one of the families wrote her father a song telling how she felt about the way he treated her. The first line was something like; 'I'm a song bird sitting in a cage..." Anyways, I wrote the poem the next day.

The poem is copywrited to me and the lyrics that inspired it are copywrite to that girl whose name I can't remember that I saw on Wife Swap.

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:iconkajm:
Neat poem!

If I may suggest... 'Denied,' rather than 'unheard.'

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"they made your kind, though I suspect they would say that God made your kindred, they only amplified what was already there."
Techno, Book 3 (anthro): [link]
:iconripjaws-girl21:
sounds good to me. i'll go change that in the title.

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I'm not insane, just mentally unstable. Is that such a bad thing?

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